Saturday, May 29, 2010

ELE BELE PREM ELE

chhotto table,duto chair
ami,tumi r coffee'r cup
bristi raat,kacher dewal
kache te bristi,joler vap

ektu hasi,4 te haat
sorolota vora kichhu aalap
ashroe khoje,ac'r hawa
buk mekhe nae,premer taap

bristi thame,haate haat
veja ghas chhoe 4 te paa
fuler gondho,veja batash
kaadhe matha r ushnotaa

kochur pata,tol tole jol
matir gondho,mon vora
katlo megh,barlo raat
niyom janae bari fera

mon kamon,mane na mon
suru biroho jontronaa
milbo abar,vijbo abar
bristi aasbe saantonaa


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8 comments:

  1. AnonymousMay 29, 2010 at 3:28 PM

    tui likhechis ar amar valo lagbena? taki hoi ?khub valo hoiche.

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  2. snehashis banerjee,the khuchro kobiMay 29, 2010 at 3:44 PM

    eta kono karan holo?

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  3. souravMay 29, 2010 at 3:44 PM

    protyek piece e osadharon,beautiful.....
    to me,last1 is the best one..bcz of cool casual lang..wish u a great success in poetry ahead..

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  4. Kamirul IslamMay 29, 2010 at 9:27 PM

    khuuuub bhalo...carry on

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  5. sandyMay 30, 2010 at 12:45 AM

    hmm, indications of a budding poet, jantam na tui kobita likhis, shabash, chaliye jaa...bhalo hochhe

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  6. SPRIHAMay 31, 2010 at 2:59 AM

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  7. SPRIHAMay 31, 2010 at 3:00 AM

    hey great piece be...nvr knw u possesd such a powerful..poetic skill,.,man ur full of surprises....\m/..darun !!

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  8. UnknownJune 2, 2010 at 1:46 AM

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